可商議

When I was attending an English language school, I wrote a journal as a homework and my teacher correct it. It was very effective because I could understand what I want to say by reading my teacher’s correction.

I will also write down what I thought about your writing as feedback.

I've done corrections several times, and I try to keep the most of the original text as much as possible.

Please send your journal when you request. I will correct it in 3 days.